She’s unafraid on the surface
But barely keeping her head above water
Drowning in chaos
Drifting further away from the light.
She is a mystery, her mind is an abyss tainted with doubts
Her stories long forgotten,
Pages of cloistered memories
Buried among the debris of her secrets.
She has reached the trifecta of loneliness
Voices inside her head kept her awake
Her hands are cold
Stone cold. Just like her heart.
Thought of AURORA’s cover of Into the Unknown while reading this. That unknown story buried inside the hearts of people that I want to find. Lovely poem :’)
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Thank you so much. I’ve heard the song and I loved it. How’s everything with you?
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Keeping busy while under semi-lockdown conditions! How about you?
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nice written 🙂 🙂
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Thank you, darling. How are you?
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I’m all good 🙂 How about you ?
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Would love to know the inspiration of this… or what made her heart so cold. (Reminds me of the movie Moana which I just rewatched 😉 )
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Honestly, all my dark poems are pretty much about me. I have a very troubled mind and there are days when I just feel empty. 😞
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Sorry to hear, but does writing about it help? It helps me. So I guess I could ask you the question. . . what froze your heart?
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Yes. It helps. I’ve been writing since I was 12 so I guess it helps in a way.
A lot of things, I am at war with myself most of the time.
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go on. . .
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That’s it. I have very dark thoughts and that comes out in my writings. Nothing really special about it.
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Well, I’m always here to read them. 😊
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Thank you. So good to hear that. I’ll do the same with you writings although I don’t go here as much as I did.
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That’s too bad. I hope you start coming around more often again😊
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I’ll try. Haha. Not gonna promise anything.
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Ok keeping no expectations 😉
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Chin up, friend. Your world maybe dark, but you are its light.
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Hi, darling! How are you? OMG. It’s been so long. 😩
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I know right? Today sucked, but there is always tomorrow.
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Beauty belongs among the clouds and one as close to the the clouds is also neighbors with the Sun. So in due time, that cold heart will be melted and all will shine in due time.
You don’t know how much I love reading pure emotions and your writings have them, that too is where my emotions go, straight into the hearts ink. Great to be reading you, missed you.😊
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Hi. So sorry for the late response. Caught up in the middle of something so I haven’t been active in WP. How’s everything?
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A response is a response lovely, the timing is of no concern….good things are worth waiting for. You’ve been missed, hope all is well. Great to see you back and writing, you haven’t lost a step or skipped a beat and that’s great.❤️🌹. Looking forward to reading your wonderful post.
Things with me are good, keeping busy, traveling sometimes, working and writing and staying smiling when seeing the wonderful people of the press.😊
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Wow. That’s good to know. I’ve been trying to really get back on writing and being active here, I’ve missed everyone.
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Great to hear!😊. You’re a wonderful person.❤️
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You too. One of the first people who followed and became my friend here on WP.
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You’re definitely worth it.🌹
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Words are felt when they speak of our truths. Miss your lines. You are great.
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Hey, Sir Andrei! How are you? Are you doing okay? Your family? Good?
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Hi! Steph, right? Sorry, my memory is betraying me haha.
We’re okay in here. Thanks for asking.
How about you? How are you holding up?
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Yes! Haha. Thank you for remembering.
We’re good. The city I’m in is on mild lockdown. Praying for everything to go back to normal.
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Yes! Memo plus is truly effective hahaha.
Good to hear that you’re okay. Are you with your family? Stay safe and well.
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Thank you, Carlos.
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Beautiful😍 So glad you posted😀
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Hey, Zeina. Thank you so much. Haha. Just thought about it.
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The fast ones are always the best ♥ I really like this side of you. Hope you learn to embrace it because your writing is beautiful.
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Thank you so much, Zeina. You’ve always been a thoughtful friend. I appreciate you so much. ♥️♥️♥️
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Same here my friend♥♥♥
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Wow. A stellar creation.
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Hello, Shantanu. It’s been a long time. How are you?
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Wow. It is been ages. I am doing good. How are you?
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Yes. It’s been a long time.
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Good to see you here
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Wow. Thank you so much for this. How are you?
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wow so beautiful. loved it. well such a badass
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Haha. How are you, darling?
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Well penned
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Hi, Thank you for reading this poem. Wrote this 4 month ago. Haha.
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Lol! My pleasure 😊
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How are you? It’s been so long!
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Yea! I’m good!! How are you?
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Loved this one!
I’ve nominated you for the Liebster Award!
https://justmecompany.wordpress.com/2020/09/16/the-liebster-award-5th/
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Wow. Sonali! You didn’t have to. This is awesome! ♥️
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You’re right. I didn’t have to,… I NEEDED TO! Congratulations!
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