You put the smile on my face
You are the shiver in my spine
The northern star outside my window
The mirror to the depths of my soul.
Tell me, how do you do it?
How do you make me fall for you every single day?
Like it’s the first time, we kissed, we touched
The world around me disappears, in a snap.
Is it the warmth of your touch that cripples my psyche?
Is it the magic of your beautiful soul?
I melt away in your arms, falling deeply every time
Tell me, Marlon, I am dying to know.
Ragazza Triste 
Aw! This is so lovely. Will make a great poem for a loved one.
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Thank you so much for reading. This is actually dedicated to my partner, we are celebrating our 104TH Monthsary today. 😍
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Ah! How beautiful & thoughtful of you. Happy monthsary! ✨🎉
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“You are the shiver in my spine.” Wonderful line!
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Thank you, Will. Your comments never fails to make me happy. 😊
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😍
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truly beautiful and heartfelt
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Aww. I am glad you liked it. I am overwhelmed, dear. Thank you so so much! 😊
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yes I did… you wrote from the heart and that which comes from the heart has a tendency to reach the heart of those that are free to love and receive love… you are very welcome
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Aww. This is so sweet. I feel so loved and blessed today so I had to write something romantic. Hehe
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This was beautiful.
Sometimes love we don’t understand it but we accept it
Good job
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Lovely write on romance and the questions to how someone fills you with love. Like I said, it’s not what someone does for you, it’s what they do to you. I like how the questions of love were put in a lovely way but required no answer because the heart already knew. A wonderfully beautiful inspiring post. Must be love🌹🌹
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Awww. I am celebrating our 104th monthsary. Ha ha. So this is timely. 🙂
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😁. Happy 104th monthsary lovely, and many more🌹🌹. Love is a wonderful thing. 😊
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Beautiful and full of love
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Thank you so much, dear.
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My pleasure
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Beautiful ❣️
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Hey, Jaya, I like your new display photo. 🙂
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Thank you so much dear ❤️❤️
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Beautifully written. and full of love
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That’s right, my heart is so full of love I couldn’t contain it so I gotta write something. Ha ha.
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Wow! That’s quite a long time! More monthsaries to come! 🙂
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Yes. Thank you so much. 🙂
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Awesome Read…
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This is full of love and romance. So well done♥️
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Sweet and Lovely. ❤ ❤ ❤
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Fantastic!
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What a beautiful poem; very romantic
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Tell her, Marlon, she’s dying to know? Beautifully expressed!
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Ha ha ha. I kept asking, he won’t answer. Hahaha
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Beautiful is the word ! 🙂 ❤
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This poem makes me wish I someone out there loves me like this. It makes love look Physically beautiful.
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You are beautiful, don’t ever think that you are not.
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That’s something I still struggle with until today.
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We all have insecurities, but don’t let it, try not to let it affect your confidence.
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Wow this piece is brilliant.
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This poem is so sweet.
Love your writing, as always.
Xx. 😀
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Thank you, Thony. How are you?
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Very welcome.
Just fine. Ha-ha. It’s only that, School’s trying to burn me out again.
Hope you’re fine as well, dear. Xx
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beautiful…loved it…especially the line… You are the shiver in my spine…
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Aww. Me too. I love that line.
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Sweet 😀
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Beautiful romantic poetry. Loved it. 🙂
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This is SO beautiful ❤❤❤❤
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Haha. Thank you, dear. Kamusta?
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You’re welcome ☺ ok naman, ikaw?
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Hey.
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