Then I hear his name
Like a euphonious melody to my ears, it sings
Like a chain to my heart, I am restrained.
I can think of a thousand words to write
I can compose hundreds of lyrical emotions
I can create unfeigned lines and phrases
But when I am with you, I am powerless
My concentration falls apart, my knees are shaking
My heart is pumping with endless mirth and romance
You take my breath away
You are my celestial relish
My world, my one true love.
Beautiful written ! Can’t wait to read more of your posts
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Oh, thank you so much. I needed to write something sweet today. 🙂
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You write emotions so well 🌸
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Thank you so much. I wanted to write something sweet today, like, I’ve been reading the other blogger’s posts, your posts. 🙂
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And you complimented me in your work. Thank you – you are very kind 🌸🤗. Btw you writing is beautiful
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That’s beautiful Ragazza!
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Thank you so much, Christine. Thank you for reading, I am so glad. 🙂
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Celestial relish – what a great phrase. I love this, RT! A beautifully written piece of romance! 🙂
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Awww. Coming from a very talented writer with your caliber, OMG. I am so happy. 🙂
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Oh, RT, you are a great writer. You have such passion and it shows in your writing. I am happy to read you and you are kindly welcome 🙂
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Wow
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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It was written in such a beautiful manner. 😀
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Yes. Writing about love is like one of my favourite things to write about. 🙂
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Yes.
Each of us has our own way of writing and it also includes our topic or the things we discuss.😊
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Yes. We all have uniques styles. How’s everything? 😊
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It’s good:)
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Thank you so much for leaving a comment and reading my poem. 🙂
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My pleasure!!
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Love this! So many feels after reading this and so many ways this resonates with me. Thank you for putting such emotions into words eloquently.
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Awww. That is so sweet. I wanted to post something nice today, and based on your comments, I think I have to write things like this from now on, on a more positive note. 🙂
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I loved it! That is exactly how I felt when I met my husband. We love each other and we are happy together but we don’t have all the excitement and sizzle we had when we first met. Well, occasionally we still have it when we go out on a date… very good blog!
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Awww. I hope you can rekindle the fire, I want you to feel the same feelings you had when you first met him. Good luck to your relationship. 🙂
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I really really like your post!! Keep posting, can’t wait for the next post!
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Aww. Thank you so much for the encouragement. How long have you been blogging?
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Since March 7 2018. What about you? where are you from?
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The Philippines. Haha! I’ve been blogging since October, 2016.
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That’s great. But I am just a kid of grade 8th. How old are you?
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Ha ha. I’m 27 now, kid. I’m like a big sister to you. Wow, pretty impressive that you’re already starting to blog, write and stuff. 🙂 Where are you from, kid?
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Manipur, India. I do write something which I know better.
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You are such a great blogger. Keep blogging and be famous.
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Nah. I don’t need to be famous. Ha ha! I just want like, a few people to read my poetry, you know, I am never gonna get published and it’s okay. 🙂
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That’s also a good thing. But I really like your post.
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Beautiful 🙂 … simply beautiful.
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Thank you so much. Love is indeed fascinating. He he. 🙂
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Beautiful words! I can relate to these same powerful emotions.
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Are you in love right now? He he.
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I’m married, have been married for ten years.
Are you currently in love or are these memories of a love that once was?
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I am currently in love. We’ve been together for 8 years and three months.
Wow. That’s great. You have children?
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Awe, how sweet!
And yes, we have 3 and that’s enough haha
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Ha ha ha. That’s cute. How many boys? Girls?
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I have 2 boys and 1 girl. Boy, girl, boy. You?
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Do you have a Facebook account? I bet you do. Ha ha.
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I do, and i hardly use that either but give been visiting it here and there. I also have Instagram and Snapchat. My accounts are at the bottom of my page if you want to follow me. Also, I can send you a private message later with my Snapchat account if you want it. It’s the one app I use the most since it’s the one that requires the least amount of commitment lol but I use Instagram a lot too.
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Ha ha. I beeter just follow you on IG, I don’t have Snapchat. Ha ha. Sure. What’s the link again to your IG account?
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@moondustedsoul if you can’t tell, I’m in love with the moon haha
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I love the moon, my name means ‘moon, lunar’ Ha ha. 😊
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Oh that’s pretty!
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I followed you. Haha. Just got home from work.
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I just followed you back as I walked inside from being at the park with the kiddos.
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Breathtaking and beautiful. 🙂
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Wow ragazza…. This is so beautiful. Well put. This is amazing!! Forget rancor… This is it!!! Hehe.. I just quoted Michael Jackson 😅
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Ha ha. Rancor is a little bit dismal, I’d go for butterflies instead. 😂
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Butterflies… Definitely!!
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Beautiful
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Thank you. 😊
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This is really sweet – and I like the way you worded it!
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Awe. Love is just a powerful thing and there’s not enough adjective to really describe it. 😊
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That’s certainly true!
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You write so well, God it’s beautiful
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Awe. Thank you so much. 😊
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Nice to meet you, thank you for saying hello and your nice comments re my site as well. Blessings to your day, Marilyn
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Hello, Marilyn. You’re welcome. Keep writing great stuff. How long have you been blogging?
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Just a few months, nice to meet you
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So romantic and beautiful..
My heart melts with each word as your emotions splash on the page..
Love it 😊
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Thank you so much. I try to write about love when I’m inspired. Ha ha.
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I really enjoyed it😊
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Beautiful.
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Thank you so much. Please try to follow my blog page. 🙂
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Done
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❤❤❤❤❤❤
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Thank you so much for this nomination. Yey! 🙂
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Thanks for sharing 🌟
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You’re welcome. Thank you for reading.
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I have felt this – love the way you put it into words. And thanks for the like at DailyBiblePrayer. May your faith grow and deepen and may God bless you as your relationship grows with Him. Laura
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Thank you so much for the comment. Yes. My faith is stronger than ever. I don’t always go to church, but I talk to God, all the time. 🙂
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You take my breath away
You are my celestial relish
Amazing…held my heart, these words did.
Love reading you and your intensely true emotions ,🖤
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Thank you so much, I appreciate you reading this. 🙂
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So beautiful and sweet. I want to have just that!
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Everyone I know wants to be loved like that as well. I wrote it because I too, wanted to be loved like that. 🙂
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Well you have a very special gift. I enjoy your reading your work very much. Thank you!
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Thank you so much. I am humbled and grateful 🙂
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so well written! celestial relish is a great phrase
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Thank you so much. Please try to follow my blog, if you can. 🙂
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True love takes breath away in just a glimp of “an eye” or in this case “a name”..
Nice wordplay and buildup.. Love it..
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Thank you so much for reading this. This is actually written for my parents. 🙂
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Is “romanticism” coming back to life? 😉
This is great!
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Haha! This is a poem I wrote for my parents. 🙂
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Oh. Their’s must be phenomenal! 😃
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auw…. sooo poetic:)
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Thank you so much for reading. 🙂
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Now, This is magically writed 🌠
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