The night was rather gelid, no sign of life to drown the silence, the rain has wiped out any hope of comfort. It was a complete darkness.
A figure shrouded in fog suddenly emerged from the rubble, a silhouette of a man, he was covered in blood, wet liquid of terror, a crimson colour of tribulation.
He wept like a child, fell to his knees and cried, clenching his fist, he cursed the world, he yelled justice, he demanded an explanation. Then he slowly remembered.
An obscene sight of betrayal. Punches were thrown, blood splattered on the walls of turpitude, guts everywhere, eviscerated. Then there was the deafening silence. Sobs. Deep bellow of remorse.
It kept raining as the man disappeared into the night. He mourned for a lost part of him, even the welkin mourned with him.
Gelid is a fabulous, old English word.
Kudos. β€
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Hey, Thank you so much, Jack. I like that word as well. π
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Loved this and all the symbolizing wordplay that went along with it. The ending was wonderful, even the welkin cried with him.πΉ
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Aw. Thank you Joker, you always have something good to say. π
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You always have good things to write and youβre always doing good things. Love your writing lovely, just amazing.πΉ
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I cringe/fear of anything blood/bloody, but this is a wonderful to read π
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Ha ha. I’ve been writing bloody poetry lately. How have you been doing?
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Mind blowing read I must say!π
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Oh. Thank you Sameerah, a little bit sad and unfair,. He he. π
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were the blows rained on the blooded man or did he rain the blows on another person?
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He was hurting internally, emotionally, his heart has been ripped to pieces because of betrayal, and I think someone is injured somewhere. π
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oh okay,,beautiful
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Hey. Thank you for reading, dear.
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What does this mean” Blueberry Scandal” (T^T)!!!
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Hey. Uhm, basically, it’s about cheating, I was thinking about blueberries while writing this so, I put the that title. Sorry for the confusion. πΉ
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I see!! Thank you!!!:D
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I’m imagining that he walked in on his significant other keeping company with a lover and in a blind rage, he killed them both with his inhumane strength.
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Hmmm. You said it. This is actually just from the perspective of the man. We couldn’t be sure if he killed his lover and the other lover, maybe there was an altercation, I will be writing another from the perspective of the woman and the guy she cheated with.
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Hey. Too morbid? π
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