The delicate rain gently embraced my trembling skin as I get closer to you
My throbbing heart drowned the silence
Echoing through the veneer of my denial.
I caught a glimpse of you from a distance
Memorizing each line on your face
The stars collided when our eyes met
I held my breath, locked in a forbidden gaze.
Your ocean of mystic bewildered my judgment
Lost in a ballad of marvel and wonder
Entangled in a hopeless dream
Uncertain. Unfamiliar.
“Can we meet again tonight”? I softly whispered
My voice sinking in a supernal reverie
“Maybe” he taunted
“For I am yours in your dreams, only in your dreams.”
Very nice. I have a haiku.
Eyes brown sea green eyes- Chance meeting briefly staring- Doubling glances-
Have a great day!!
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Wow. That was an awesome haiku. I’ll try to start writing haiku again, if I can. He he.
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Beautiful ❤️❤️
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Thank you, darling. 🙂
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Impressive…
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Thank you, Leo. 🙂
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Well done penned, my dear Ragazza 🙂
From your warm words longing is arising,
to feel love and light
Touching your heart
A painted dream
That may come true.
Thanks for sharing your beauty soul, my friend 🙂
Didi
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Hey, Didi. This is very sweet. I am grateful. 🙂
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Welcome, my dear Ragazza 🙂
Enjoy your time
Didi
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Nice…. Looks like I gotta use it on my GF.😄
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Ha ha. She’ll swoon over you, for sure. 🙂
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Wow, I love this. You should write more of romance. Awesome awesome awesome♥️♥️♥️
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This doesn’t happen all the time, though. 🙂
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Sensuous and alluring. You created an aura
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Aww. Thank you, darling.
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My pleasure always
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Wow. This is some great work. 💪
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Heeeey! How are you? It’s been a long time, darling.
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I know…. Its been a minute😅 but your work keeps getting better.
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Loved it …… beautiful writing
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Thank you so much, a bit sad, eh? Haha
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Sadness is beautiful too
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I have nominated you for The Sunshine Blogger Award.
https://daisymae874.wordpress.com/2018/10/27/sunshine-blogger-award-4/
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Only in dreams…darn…
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Damn like it. Sometimes love feels too good to be true. Felt like I was watching a Disney movie.
Love is blind
Love is an illusion
love is risky
and that’s the conclusion
good job
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Aww. Your comment is too sweet. Thank you so much, had to take a break from writing dark stuff. 🙂
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Well penned.
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Thank you, darling. I’d like to be a bit of a romantic, once in a while. 🙂
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It’s necessary. You’re welcome, Dearie.
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beautiful… especially loved the ending verses…
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Thank you, darling. A bit sad but it happens to the best of us.
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welcome…hauntingly beautiful lines…
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Wow, Beautifully penned!!
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Thanks, Kranti. I love reading comments like yours. 🙂
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The feeling is mutual dear! 😊
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Lovely write and such description behind the story in the words. Loved how the emotions were carried as well. To see someone constantly in your dreams guaranteed is almost as good as seeing them on occasion. If the heart is strong, your dreams become reality. Loved the ending, for the heart was definitely caught. Great job!🌹🌹
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Thank you, darling. Sona said something about writing something sweet or romantic or about love and I came up with this, a bit sad but you know. He he.
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You’re very welcome lovely🌹. Well, you wrote something very romantic and lovely, very creative. And it’s only sad if you look at it the wrong way, you must remember there is a light side to everything, the way you wrote the ending may have been sad for some but I saw it quite romantically happy.🌹❤️. You’re so talented, you’re writing happy ending subconsciously😉
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I adore this, beautifully written.
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Thank you, darling. I am so grateful for your comment.
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Most welcome. 🌹
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I can so identify with this; the ultimate love that now exists only in dreams – quite, quite beautiful :O) xx
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Unrequited and painful. Ha ha.
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Beautifully written ❤️ Cheers!
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Hey, thank you so much for giving this piece a change. 🙂
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Beautiful 😱❤
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Aww. Thank you so much, I am glad you liked it. 🙂
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Ah…these dreams of ours.
“To die, to sleep – to sleep, perchance to dream – ay, there’s the rub, for in this sleep of death what dreams may come…”
You know?
Beautiful, darling.
You’ve got me quoting Shakespeare at you for god’s sake!!!
❤️
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Ha ha ha. Thank you so much, darling. Shakespeare is awesome!
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I love it.
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Thank you, darling. I am glad you liked it. 🙂
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U r welcome.
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Hi! I“ve seen you`ve commented one of my writings “Forgive me, my dear”. Thank you for the comment. I decided to read that one of yours and I do like it! You certainly have a poetic talent. 🙂
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Thank you, Tatyana. It’s alright, we’re all busy and I am just happy your replied. 🙂
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😮 wow…that was an awesome piece! Bewildered 💙💙
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Thank you. Hey, I missed you. What have you been up to these days?
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My mum was here a month & she usually takes all my time. Then also my dog has a tumor so it was lots with that. And I’m studying- Cognitive psychology, Japanese & portuguêse:))
Have a good day 😀
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Aww. How’s your dog?
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