damaged · evil · fight · fragmented · hope · poetry · pride · tears



Drenched in blood
A crimson colour of mourning
Desperate for a cure
Slipping away


Scraped violently into the abyss of hell
Slept helplessly beside the galling chaos
The void in his heart
The scar in his soul, crippling


Skin blistered by disdain
Hands withered in fetter
Decorum immured by guilt
Died unknown.

84 thoughts on “Lacuna

  1. Emotionally written and worded with such feeling. Art can be taken many ways and darkness is sometimes misunderstood. There is struggle within this and that’s a sign of positivity, without struggle there’s no progress. Powerful read indeed, dark but you have to see beyond the light.


      1. Yes, because there is light in the darkness just as there is strength in weakness. One feeds off the other, great poem lovely and you are so welcome. 🌹🌹


      2. No problem, you are so welcome.🌹. Keep writing, you’re writing is awesome😊. We all thrive to get better.🌹


      1. Why thankyou? It’s been my pleasure to read your work. Keep up with the good work 😊😊


      2. Just a 2-3 months. I find it inspiring to read to others work. How they look a simple idea and created such beautiful lines.


      3. Yeah it is from different parts of the world. The views and opinions are expressed in different ways.


      4. Yes. That’s one of the things that I love about this community. I mean, we came from different countries but we all have the same passion. I love it. πŸ™‚


  2. Sometimes we need a bit of darkness to get a better view on the light that hides around the corner. Great wordplay and imagery. I like it a lot. Also thanks for dropping round my blog.


  3. Amazing blog! Do you have any tips and hints for aspiring
    writers? I’m planning to start my own site soon but I’m a little lost on everything.

    Would you recommend starting with a free platform like WordPress or go for a paid option? There are so many choices
    out there that I’m completely overwhelmed .. Any tips?

    Bless you!


  4. This is a dark but beautiful poem, I like how symbolic it is! The images speak for themselves and rely on what you feel. I like that! I’m glad you commented on my last post as I have now read some good poetry !!


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